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I'm in love with my Brother's girl
 
 
  I’m in love with my brother’s girl
The voice of my heart can’t really tell.
My feelings like old is back
That pride of a man I now lack.
Is it cool on my path to tell her?
Or it will be heavy on my heart forever?
I’m insane to think of this
Leading my love to abyss,
I’ve vowed I’ll never love again
Why am I going back to this love of pain?
I have searched in me; this ill feelings
It’s a betrayal, these brotherly dealings.

I have fought with my intention to beat
This preposterous thought I can’t hit.
Friends to this; they can’t let
Knowing for her I’ll get.
She’s on and there to thrill me
Always there to share love with thee.
Should I lay to her my love intention?
Or tell her with a lovely pretension.
Will she be faithful to pronounce to me “I do? ”
She may howl me off, when due.
A short term to go as lovers
I may loose the trust from my brother forever.

I have to go back and think this twice
Curtail my feelings, and never compromise.
No to her, is a brave answer
A long road to go with my lovely brother
How will this vague story be told?
Forever pains I’ll hold.
“It’s absurd” I have to admit
To this my heart will never permit.
I wouldn’t hide and love in secret
Loving her, my pride I’ll forfeit.
This story will never be told well
That I’m in love with my brother’s girl!





Comments on this page:
Comment posted by Niki Niki( nikiboy_nikiboyyahoo.com ), 12/10/2010 at 12:00pm (UTC):
Too much rhythm.too precise for me.too many words.first stanza for instance
"in love with my brother`s woman.
voice of my heart really can`t tell.
feelings old re-awakened.."would have moved me more..just my opinion though,still a good work.

Comment posted by Kelechi( ), 06/24/2010 at 1:40pm (UTC):
What a poem, from a poet of adroit



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